diff --git a/templates/presentation-4real.hamlet b/templates/presentation-4real.hamlet
index e8ae998..3e4fcc5 100644
--- a/templates/presentation-4real.hamlet
+++ b/templates/presentation-4real.hamlet
@@ -12,10 +12,10 @@
    <ul>
      <li>We needed a place to keep track of our results for:
        <ul>
-          <li>our research
+          <li>carrying out our research
           <li>teaching our students
           <li>just playing with our data sets
-     <li>(but didn't want to save the world and earn $$$)
+     <li>(but didn't want to save the world or earn $$$)
 
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    <h2>Alternatives?